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Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:08/29/2008
Critique:I do not know where you are going to take this but it was quite humerous. The dialogue was well presented and the thoughts contained within where somewhat off the wall and I like that. Why not include absurdity in the mix of things, it not only intrigues the mind, it also explores alternative ideas. I enjoyed your story.

Grade:Good


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Main CritiquePosted by: Wcoltd on 09/08/2008 12:10 AM

Glad you enjoyed it, I wrote it right after reading "Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy" by Douglas Adams that's where I picked up the style of writing.

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