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Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:09/06/2008

Critique:I loved this write, deep and yet so true. The whole thing flows almost like lyric set to music. The message you relay is a question certain people are confronted with on a daily basis, what a shame. In NYC, when I was young, heroin was the queen that lured people to their demise. Today in the States, it is probably crack cocaine. Glad I got through it all and am alive today. Great work. Dennis 


Grade:Excellent


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Main CritiquePosted by: kuirq on 09/07/2008 01:06 PM

Over here, it's crystal meth. But whatever the drug of choice may be, they are all equally devastating most especially when the user is in too deep. I too am glad for those who are able to stop using and therefore can go on and live a better life.  Kudos to you all who were able to realize that they should stop while they still can, it requires great self-control and courage to do so!

I appreciate all the comments, thank you, Dennis :) .

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