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Given By: kuirq
Critique Date:09/26/2008
Critique:Each line seems to be able to stand on its own, having in each a single thought and yet it is one that complements and strengthens the next line. You tackle so many issues and yet you make the reader come to a full stop with your last line, somehow, the answer is all there in that one line. Thanks for sharing. Really quite thought-provoking.

Grade:Excellent


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Main CritiquePosted by: Quaneefah on 09/26/2008 03:49 PM

Sometimes life should be about how to invoke truths within people so they can look into thier own lives and come up or move forward when stuck.Thank you for the comment I really do appreciate.

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