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Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:07/12/2009
Critique:A nice little poem on the sad side of things. I liked the lines "shatering dreams to smithereens" and "a cupful of tears in tow", very appropriate for the mood your poem creates. I can vision a person standing on the beach after a break up with that someone special, feeling very remorse and philosophizing, relating their own life experiences to that of the waves, it comes then it goes. GOOD JOB!

Grade:Good


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Main CritiquePosted by: raenie on 07/12/2009 12:38 PM

Hi Dennis and thank you very much for your kind comments :)--those two lines that you chose were actually my favorites--hopefully not too many people experience this walk along that beach called Life--or I'm probably just thinking wishfully...

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