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Given By: CountryAngel
Critique Date:07/13/2009
Critique:I think this poem was very good.. I enjoy walking on the beach, maybe with you?

Grade:Excellent


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Main CritiquePosted by: raenie on 07/14/2009 12:31 AM

thank you very much Diane :)...a walk on the beach with you one day sure would be lovely :) I personally like to look for shells--looking forward to that--what beach would you recommend?

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