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Given By: Paladin elda
Critique Date:07/15/2009
Critique:Reading this poem is like walking up a set of stairs one small step at a time. When you get to the top step you trip and crash to the bottom. I enjoyed this poem vary much, and the use of the line "They come and they go" makes this poem what it is......................joe

Grade:Excellent


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Main CritiquePosted by: raenie on 07/16/2009 10:32 AM

Thank you very Joe--I really liked your analogy, hmm maybe one could write a poem with regards to that ;)--as for that line, "they come and they go"--I have bluemoon to thank for that :), since she helped me with my revision--thanks again for your wonderful comments and enjoy your day :)

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