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Given By:	bluemoon
Critique Date:	01/22/2010

Critique:	A lovely write that can't fail to bring a smile. You had me hooked right from the start, feeling the frustration and impatience at the car rental check-in. Economical and very effective choice of words; you paint a vivid picture with every word playing a part. Loved the unexpected subject of the meeting. Thanks for making me smile :)

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jacquiegum Offline (Last Access 08/29/2010 09:49 AM)

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on 01/23/2010 07:10 AM

Thank YOU for investing your time in the read! Hope to get a look with this one - I'll be submitting

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Offline (Last Access 09/09/2010 03:21 PM)

on 01/24/2010 04:39 PM

good luck with your submission :)

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