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Given By: Katina
Critique Date:08/09/2009

Critique:Wow! I can't believe I have not read this haiku yet. Wow! 4 star write Ninna. Great work!. Really like the last line, it's a twist.


Grade:Excellent


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Main CritiquePosted by: kuirq on 08/10/2009 12:38 PM

I have to say I'm guilty as well of not being able to read all of the writes here, hopefully I'll get to cacth up one time :). Thank you for the comments, Katina, I'm glad to know the last line proved to be a good change (I'm thinking that's probably the line I changed...I have to check my handwritten original). Enjoy your day!

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