Sorry, showing my ignorance. I've never really studied mythology although I now you've pointed it out I do know of Echo and Narcissus. It great though that your haiku still has meaning without the knowledge of mythology.

I guess the universality of Echo's myth lent itself to the haiku. No worries Bluemoon, sometimes we forget is all.  Thanks for your reply and comments!

Hmm, I think I might have edited it slightly, which particular line I can't say right now, I think it's the last. Forgive my brain, it went out for a moment ;). I think I should make it a habit of putting the old version (or part of it) in the brief description, just so readers (and me!) don't get confused with the comments (especially to the replies since they can't be edited). Thank you for bringing this back up and taking the time to do some re-visiting and editing your comments.  I really appreciate it, Sharon :D. Have a nice day!