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Given By: astaclara@yahoo.com
Critique Date:04/01/2009
Critique:I love this story.  I had been reading one entry after the other in the romance section, right up until romance was dribbling out of my nose and ears.  So I said, I'm going to read one more thing and call it a day. So I chose this story from horror and I thought I was going to stop midway and turn off the computer but no, I read the entire thing.  You are very good at hooking even the most tired, unwilling reader, and I think you should write more because well...you're good at it.

Grade:Excellent


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Main CritiquePosted by: fevilleg on 04/02/2009 10:10 PM

haha thank you for your kind words, i actually have a few stories posted in the horror section, i'll try to check out some of your writing when i have chance.

 

 

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