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Given By: [Deleted User]
Critique Date:02/07/2008
Critique:Ha ha, you got me - me of all people. I can usually smell a twist coming. I like your stuff, it's always well laid out, plenty of background fill(padding out)even paced and unusual in this case - little punctuation - which allows the story to flow. But I haven't said anything here that you don't already know, have I. Nice one.

Grade:Good


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Main CritiquePosted by: Apparition on 02/08/2008 06:38 PM

Haha well now you know what happens when I'm extremely hungry :P

 Post #118


 
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