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Given By: bluemoon
Critique Date:03/28/2008
Critique:I really enjoyed this piece. It is so descriptive & rich in imagery I almost felt like I was one of the neighbours watching all of the goings on. It is well written and keeps the readers interest right to the end. No matter how badly we fight as children we still love our brothers and sisters . Nice write.

Grade:Good


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Main CritiquePosted by: Musimwa on 03/31/2008 02:53 AM

thank u for your rich commentary on my story. Thank u very. Have a blessed day.

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