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Given By: Tubbs
Critique Date:04/20/2008
Critique:A very pleasing write where the forces of mather nature intermingle and react to each others powers. I can see reading your poetry to a child and taking their mind for a ride. A happy ending too, Mr. Sky is appeased so the ocean and wind can be at peace too. Good write. Dennis

Grade:Good


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Main CritiquePosted by: kuirq on 04/21/2008 12:04 AM

 I'm glad it has the potential to appeal to a child. Thanks for your comments.

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