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When Men Choose....

When men choose….


 


 


The best can’t come from choices we make.


Either will it come from such efforts others bake.


Thus, what happens when alone men choose;


We are destined to lose!


 


 


How far did he go, many do wonder.


Fruitless is sweat that is left to wander.


Wisdom has it when alone men choose


At day’s end they are of no use!


 


 


Let Christ, his part lead.


Surely, no failure in your life will succeed.


But when alone men is let to choose


His destine is  life without clues!



by Musimwa (Viewed 141 times)

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Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:06/10/2008

Critique:Amen! Good religious philosophy, although, not everyone sees it that way. Some men will never open up there eyes enough to let the message through. And though, as you said "His destine is life without clues." Enjoyed the read, thank you. Dennis

Grade:Good


 
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