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Wake Up

Wake up and smell the coffee


Time is running out


Get up and act


For another chance will never come



by Dorie (Viewed 1481 times)

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Other Critiques of this Work
Given By: kuirq
Critique Date:06/15/2008
Critique:Two words that I so often hear...and you've summed it up succinctly. No alarm clock can say what you have,  that's for sure!
Grade:Good


Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:06/13/2008
Critique:Wow, I better get up and get going so I do not miss a single opportunity. You make it so urgent and your are probably right, snooze and you loose. I wrote a haiku simular to your poem. You are very direct in your writing and probably in life too, on this point, I can only guess. Dennis
Grade:Good


Given By:[Deleted User]
Critique Date:06/13/2008
Critique:Nicely said, I do agree!
Grade:Good


 
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