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Heroes

Visions of warriors ride through my head.

But how can that be? For they are long dead.

Sitting by fires the stories are told.

Heard by the young, relived by the old.


Stories of wars, the beginning of life.

Stories of heroes, of men and their wives.

Do you remember Greece, Troy and Rome?

How about Mount Olympus, where Gods called their home?


Poseidon, Aphrodite and Zeus, just to name a few.

You lived your life well so they'd show mercy to you.

Achilles and Hector are heroes of old.

The greatest story ever, well, that's what I'm told.


Now heroes wear uniforms that display their names.

And their armies are teams that merely play games.

Lives are not taken when these battles are lost,

The price for admission is the only cost.


Now heroes have names like Montana and Rice

And they make millions, and we pay the price.

But what a mere pittance, for it could be said

When millions of soldiers are infact left dead.


So I'll gladly pay salaries to these millionaires

To keep battleships docked and jets out of the air.

Although more wars are coming, it never will end,

We can only pray, we can also pretend.



by Sgt B (Viewed 262 times)

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Given By: Katina
Critique Date:06/21/2008

Critique:I like that you added names of mythological characters and real war hero's in your poem, it added a nice flavor to the piece. Good work Ron as always. I have to say, when it comes to war, I don't know what to feel about it, I suppose if there was no millitary, then terrorist would think they could do whatever they want, on the other hand, why does killing have to equal more killing? Its a no win situation for war of any kind, but, its needed in times of a major threat to a society. I only pray that one day, there will be less of it, "an end, will be the one ending that people don't think about." That day will come, I just hope its long after I am gone :)
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Grade:Excellent


Given By: CountryAngel
Critique Date:06/16/2008

Critique:Another good one Sgt. B. The scripture says, there will always be termoil in the middle east ! So yes you are right, in what you write : "It will never end... We can only pray, we cn also pretend".  
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Grade:Excellent


 
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