CATEGORY: Lyric


When I'm Gone

When you see my face again, I think you'll understand


I'm not the same kid I used to be


I just thought you should know this


 


On the phone, I feel the excitement


Or at least what you let me feel


But when your eyes finally find me


The realization's all too real


 


**You only really love me when I'm gone


I've waited for you for so long, but it's a lost cause


You only really feel right when I'm wrong


I can't wait for you to finally see, I won't be here forever


 


We used to be so close, nothing ever mattered


Cross your heart and swear, you'll still be my best friend


The day you went away, you said to never forget you


You're face is all too real now, but please just go away now


 


I wanted just to hold you, to say it'd be okay


You're pushing me away, and I'm falling fast


Since when did miles matter? Since when did they decide


The rules that we must follow. I swear I won't conform


 


**But You only really love me when I'm gone


I've waited for you for so long, but it's a lost cause


You only really feel right when I'm wrong


I can't wait for you to finally see, I won't be here forever


 


***I can't wait for you to wake up


And see that I'm not here anymore


I won't be your burden, I won't be your regret


Or another obligation for you


Now you can leave your love somewhere else



by Apparition (Viewed 255 times)

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Given By: madaddicted
Critique Date:06/27/2008

Critique:Excellent! Wouldn't change a thing! : )

Grade:Excellent


 
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