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Barefoot Faith

Faith,


is the grass we walk on.


 


 I stood in the mud.


 


With bare feet.


Looking down,


and asking


for some type of


forgiveness.


 


For,


being poor.




and never believing


in myself.


 


When the grass dies,


belief remains.



by Katina (Viewed 105 times)

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Given By: bluemoon
Critique Date:07/02/2008

Critique:'when the grass dies, belief remains'  Wow, this is powerful, I wish I could feel that way. I have nothing to say except, it's beautiful, emotional & very visual.

Grade:Excellent


Given By: madaddicted
Critique Date:07/01/2008

Critique:I think this is just fine the way it is. My favorite lines are "When the grass dies, belief remains". Another good one!

Grade:Excellent


Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:07/01/2008

Critique:I really liked this one Katina because it is so true. I am glad your inner self made the realization. Dennis

Grade:Excellent


Given By: CountryAngel
Critique Date:07/01/2008

Critique:A good write !! This is how you feel and so true !

Grade:Excellent


 
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