CATEGORY: Poetry
Barefoot Faith
Faith,
is the grass we walk on.
I stood in the mud.
With bare feet.
Looking down,
and asking
for some type of
forgiveness.
For,
being poor.
and never believing
in myself.
When the grass dies,
belief remains.
by Katina (Viewed 105 times) Show Brief Description
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| Given By: | bluemoon
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| Critique Date: | 07/02/2008 |
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| Critique: | 'when the grass dies, belief remains' Wow, this is powerful, I wish I could feel that way. I have nothing to say except, it's beautiful, emotional & very visual. |
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| Given By: | madaddicted
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| Critique Date: | 07/01/2008 |
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| Critique: | I think this is just fine the way it is. My favorite lines are "When the grass dies, belief remains". Another good one! |
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| Given By: | Dennis
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| Critique Date: | 07/01/2008 |
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| Critique: | I really liked this one Katina because it is so true. I am glad your inner self made the realization. Dennis |
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| Given By: | CountryAngel
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| Critique Date: | 07/01/2008 |
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| Critique: | A good write !!
This is how you feel and so true ! |
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