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[Relentless Writing 7 Tokens]

What do you see?

What do you see,

When you look at me?

Is it beauty? Or is it uglyness?

Tell me the truth,

What do you honestly see, when you look at me?

by auroragirl96 (Viewed 151 times)

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Given By:	Paladin Warrior
Critique Date:	10/31/2008

Critique:	A poem asking for honesty, good luck with that. One thing I enjoyed about your poem is that it is straight froward...................joe


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Given By:	Sgt B
Critique Date:	07/29/2008

Critique:	Sometimes you should be very careful wht you wish for ;) Todays vain society puts way too much stock in ones appearence. Your poem reflects that. good job on that note. kind of short and leaves it open for thought.
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Given By:	Dennis
Critique Date:	07/29/2008

Critique:	Your write is somewhat philosphical because most people would not tell you you are ugly to spare your feelings even if you were. People tell lies when they think it will help, human nature.


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