CATEGORY: Poetry


Lucky Me!


As we walk in stores, your hand in mine.


Having you close, is making me shine.


As we worship in Church, hands raised to the sky.


Praying together, voices raised high.



I think "Lucky me."



As I think of the past, how tough it has been.


God has now blessed me, I see you and I grin.


You support me with love, and help me out.


I listen to you, because you don't shout.



I whisper "Lucky me."



As we hold each other, I'm squeezing you tight.


I'm in love with you, and I know that it's right.


I now have a partner, to share my life.


Not just a best friend, but also a wife.



I say "Lucky me."



As you are leaving, heading back to your place.


My pain and hurt, shows on my face.


But I know you'll return, we'll be together again.


As I am still waiting, for our joined life to begin.



I cry "Lucky me."



As I'm thanking God, for the wife that he chose.


And changing my life, as my love it grows.


I praise my God, and I love my wife!


I am so blessed, with this love filled life!



I rejoice "LUCKY ME!"




by Sgt B (Viewed 183 times)

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Given By: CountryAngel
Critique Date:08/02/2008

Critique:Sgt. B,Yes, you truly are lucky.Not everyone finds their true love in life.I to am lucky, like you finding my love in my husband,Oct. will be married for 40 years..I agree.  Thank the Lord for all !Beautiful write.   
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Grade:Excellent


 
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