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Thanks For Your Site!

Thanks For Your Site!


 


It’s the end of the working day


Time to go home, leave the stress behind,


Relax in my own world


Chill out and unwind.


 


Put my feelings into words


Share them with my friends online,


Read their poetry and stories


As I sip on my wine.


 


It better than therapy  


A great release for my heart


And if it wasn’t for OSWS


I wouldn’t know where to start.


 


Happy Birthday to you all


And thanks for your site,


An inspiration that’s needed


What a way to spend my nights.


 



by Trene (Viewed 181 times)

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Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:08/18/2008

Critique:It is such an honor to read your words and to know others think it all seems worth it. To have a member post a poem about your hard work takes the cake and makes me for one, simply feel good. Thank you so much for your Kind words. Dennis

Grade:Good


Given By: Katina
Critique Date:08/18/2008

Critique:Cheers! Thank you for sharing the poem, so glad you enjoy the site. I'm sure we will get the word out even more the 2nd year of being opened. Thank you Trene for the poem.

Grade:Good


Given By: CountryAngel
Critique Date:08/17/2008

Critique:NICE POEM, WE SURE ENJOY THIS SITE AND A GLASS OF WINE TO!

Grade:Good


Given By: bluemoon
Critique Date:08/16/2008

Critique:Hey, someone else who enjoys a glass of wine whilst visiting the site. Nice poem. Cheers !!

Grade:Good


 
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