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Whisper

Soft whispering sounds

Ends the silence of regret

Listen, love again

by Dennis (Viewed 162 times)

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Given By:	kuirq
Critique Date:	09/07/2008

Critique:	I've always loved the word 'whisper'...I think there's something enchanting about it...and I will say the same about this haiku! It's a truly wonderful read...a great haiku that feeds the mind with a rich imagery that a whisper could hold.


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Given By:	enamoured
Critique Date:	09/06/2008

Critique:	This is some really good writing Dennis!! A very pleasant thought ....and some how it's just apt for me at the moment. Thankyou so much for sharing. I really needed to read this. Shreya


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Given By:	CountryAngel
Critique Date:	09/06/2008

Critique:	Den, I thought this was a good one.. Keep up the GREAT work !


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Given By:	bluemoon
Critique Date:	09/05/2008

Critique:	This is a lovely haiku. It has a really gentle feel & holds an intrigue, leaving the reader to wonder. The alliteration of the letter s works so well and is almost onamatopoeic. Was unsure at first about the s on breaks but it keeps the alliteration going. Really like it, keep reading it over and over.


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