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From The Heart To A Letter

I want to be with you not because I love you but because you love me the way I am, you dont ask for compromises, you dont complain. You only know how to spread Love. My years of wait came to an end when I spoke to you. I don't have to be someone else. I feel like talking to you for hours & hours when you call. The way I thirst for your voice never been so thirsty for anything else.  It's as if slowly you are pulling me towards a new world which I never expected so soon. When you say such sweet words I loose myself in magical thoughts. God has hinted me that I was made just for you. You are a ocean of love which never ends.



by raji_dil (Viewed 460 times)

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Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:09/24/2008

Critique:Hi raji dil, glad to have you on board at One Stop. Happiness is something we all desire and through love it can be attained. Your write made me feel good, like there is still hope for those that have not had love for awhile. You seem to discribe finding a soul mate and you would be very fortunate if this is the case. You could continue writing based on this theme and expand the story. The only change I would make is on the line God has hinted to me.
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Grade:Good


 
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