CATEGORY: Poetry


The End

Nothing more to do when the world is through


Keep going thinking but not thinking what should we do.


Histories have been told.


All that has come, went, gone cold.


NO matter what the soul has to hold.


Today were still not sold.


Even though our time will come.


We'll be particles in the sun.


Think about your story.


What is meant.


Leading a good life.


Leaving your righteous footprints.


No one is alone.


You are responsible for your own.


Decisions that you make.


You've been told please don't unfold.


Make our lives be no mistake. 



by Quaneefah (Viewed 128 times)

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Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:09/25/2008

Critique:I think that is a lesson all people should learn. Regardless of what robbers, thieves and politicians perclaim, make our lives be no mistake. A person has one chance in life to decide the outcome and live by it, the decision is a matter of heartfelt choice. Maybe how you were brought up, values, morals and knowing what is right and following through. I am starting to really enjoy your poetry, thought provoking and deep, thanks again for posting here. Dennis
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Grade:Excellent


 
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