| CATEGORY: Haiku |
|
SHATTERED
Echos of betrayal
Aching...mooring rope of grief
Broken soul laments
by enamoured (Viewed 1282 times)
| You must log-on in order to critique and grade any writings. Login here. |
| Other Critiques of this Work |
| Given By: | [Deleted User] |
| Critique Date: | 12/09/2008 |
|
| Critique: | Oh my, there's some real feeling behind these words. How did I manage to miss this little gem? A haiku packed full of emotion and a superb choice of words. Well done with this one, you should write more! |
| [View Replies] |
|
| Grade: |  |
| Given By: |   StormxXxBoV 
|
| Critique Date: | 12/08/2008 |
|
| Critique: | The images this piece produced in me, truly stunning. I'm definitely going to be reading more of your work, I love it. It's powerful. |
| [View Replies] |
|
| Grade: | |
| Given By: |   kuirq
|
| Critique Date: | 10/28/2008 |
|
| Critique: | This haiku has a gripping effect. Each word you used totally complemented each other, making for quite a powerful picture. Thanks for sharing. |
| [View Replies] |
|
| Grade: | |
| Given By: |  raenie
|
| Critique Date: | 10/27/2008 |
|
| Critique: | Wow Shreya, I do think that you have a very powerful haiku here...the imagery alone speaks volumes, power packed indeed. I agree with Sgt B, with such few words, you've managed to make a haiku with suhc a strong impact. Nice one :) |
|
|
| Grade: | |
| Given By: | Dennis
|
| Critique Date: | 10/21/2008 |
|
| Critique: | Impressive, alot of feeling wrapped up in this one, most people can relate to simular experiences. |
| [View Replies] |
|
| Grade: | |
| Given By: | Sgt B
|
| Critique Date: | 10/21/2008 |
|
| Critique: | Very deep in so few words. Great job! |
| [View Replies] |
|
| Grade: | |
|
View Portfolio
View Public Profile
View Blog
Send Private Message
Send IM via AIM
Send IM via Yahoo