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If Change gonna come....

If change gonna come…


 


 


If change gonna come


Let it unbind our eager voices;


Written or spoken.


Let it wash away ;


All Gestapo seeds sowed in streets.


Let it lighten secret  subways


Where state vampires are fattened.


Let it flame down all torture chambers


Built by rough and sad hearts.


 


 


If change gonna come,


Let it visit our markets, shops,


With loads of bread, fruits and oils


Let our automobiles run a kilometer and two.


Let my wife and I,


Share happily our bed without political enmity


Let us believe in a future of our own.


 


If change gonna come,


Let it come fresh;


Let it come to stay….


 


 



by Musimwa (Viewed 1011 times)

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Given By: pulltheletter
Critique Date:05/15/2009

Critique:Nicely done and well said.
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Grade:Excellent


Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:11/04/2008

Critique:It is a nice dream you speak about, and yet, it may be possible if enough people want the same thing and have their way but here comes the politics. Perhaps a strong humanitarian leader could find a way.

Grade:Excellent


Given By:[Deleted User]
Critique Date:11/03/2008

Critique:For somepeople change to a fearful thing, and out of fear comes heartachs for others......joe

Grade:Excellent


 
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