Haiku's (for Dennis) - Haiku : One-Stop Write Shop

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Haiku's (for Dennis)

Beautiful woman
you are the light God sent me;
Nature becomes you.

When the sky is black
your green eyes are the beacons;
our love conquers all.

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Given By:	[Deleted User]
Critique Date:	11/06/2008

Critique:	A lovely tribute to someone who is obviously very special. Your 2 haiku link perfectly together as 2 stanzas of a poem. Have you thought of adding more ? Although it is beautiful just the way it is.
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Given By:	CountryAngel
Critique Date:	11/05/2008

Critique:	Beautiful writing, and den has blue eyes..
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Given By:	Dennis
Critique Date:	11/05/2008

Critique:	Hey, that was great, thank you and I am impressed. You must of had those Haiku in a shoe box on the upper shelf in your closet for some time, ready to go, or, they just flow from your mind, either way, impressive.
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