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Identify the Prison and the Walls Will Fall

Identify the Prison and the Walls Will Fall

 You have all seen a bumper sticker that reads “Freedom Isn’t Free” or words similar. When my eye caught this message my mind realized that the person who is so proud to have displayed the message did not see the full reality in the message. You see this message is not real, that is, in its current form it does not show reality. Why? First, the message is outside of what is true, because truth is reality. Knowing that truth is reality is very important. Second, all persons listening to me exist outside of what is true. I know it sounds odd to hear someone tell you that you do not exist inside of reality, but I assure you that when I am finished, you will have the ability to see in the dark.  
If you all picture the statement “Freedom isn’t Free” or “Freedom is Not Free” I will disassemble it and show you its reality. I will start with the word “Freedom”, F-R-E-E-D-O-M. Did you hear it? The word “Freedom” contains in it the word “Free”, this fact will be clear later. My true definition of “Freedom” simply reads “You are you and not else”. It is a bit of an odd definition; let me explain it to remove the difference in our understandings so that they show even. You must think in these terms; the quantification of a single object is one and nothing else. One apple is one apple and not two or any other quantity. Also; the perceived color of anything without luminance is black and not any other. The word “Isn’t” is simply an inequality, not equal to. The word “Free” has many meanings including “Open”, “Liberated” and “at no cost “. My true definition of “Free” is simply “You”. The explanation of this meaning is outside of the scope of this paper, but by no means is it outside your ability to understand it. Now that I have brought the statement “Freedom isn’t Free” into reality I will assemble it so that it reads true. The statement now reads “You are you and not else and not equal to you”. This statement which at one point seemed clear to you now seems a bit perplexing. As stated earlier you are; at no fault to you; outside of reality. To see the statement in its entire truth I must bring you to truth and the meaning will be clear.
If truth is reality, is it fair to say that reality is truth? No. Why? To say that reality is truth is equal in thought to saying liquorish is black and black is liquorish. To think that all thinks black is liquorish is completely ridiculous. The flipside to reality is a bit different than liquorish. Liquorish is just candy but reality is much more. Truth is reality and reality is the perception of truth. Meaning a person’s reality is simply the degree to which they whiteness, are shown, and are withheld from truth.  
Now to shine a little light in front of you all so that you can see where you are, no human who exist on this planet, past, present or future is at all free. We are all imprisoned for as long as we live. Some of the people who are imprisoned are yet further imprisoned under and behind layers of deception. Most importantly, many are imprisoned by society in what is known as traditional prisons. It is the imprisonment of people who society looks down upon that assures societies perception that they are free when they are not. I know you all are wondering how you are imprisoned, by who are you imprisoned and why are you imprisoned. You already know that a person behind bars is in a prison. Also a person behind a curtain of deceit is said to be imprisoned. This deception is vast in range. A few topics for your own research are; democracy, war, terrorist, safety and security and sustained resources In the future. The truth is there exist a group of men who feel that they are elite and who feel that you and I are not worthy of life. They create wars, prisons, and civilizations to do work for them so that they can live like gods. In no way can they hide the truth or sweep it under the carpet. They simple sweep you under the carpet. The hardest truth to realize is there is nothing you can do about it; it has been in the works for hundreds of years. Society has been too busy messing with jobs, family, iPods, and PS3’s to be bothered with every humans real job here on Earth which is to identify truth.
Now that you know society can imprison men and a few men can imprison all civilization. There yet exists a prison that no human can escape. I understand that it may be difficult to hear the truth concerning the prison in which we all live in. The truth is that as long as you are a human on Earth you live everyday of your life in prison. Why? Humans are not free entities, meaning they cannot live just as humans alone. Humans need oxygen, humans need food, and humans need water. Also humans are not free living, meaning that humans are not free to live forever. If a human were to lose a sufficient amount of blood they will die. If a human were to not consume food or water they will die. Human life is in no manner what so ever free. If humans cannot live without fear of death then they will never be free. It is your own body, your own emotions and your own fear that imprisons you. This is the truth.
You all my have assumed by now that my standing on the problem of whether freedom is or is not free must be that freedom is free. To the unrealized statement “Freedom isn’t Free”, I will exchange the word “isn’t” for “is” and the realized statement now reads “You are you and not else and are equal to you. This shows that freedom is indeed free just like one apple is one apple and equal to one apple.  
So how can humans be imprisoned and still be free? How can a person picture a beach in their mind, hear the ocean, feel the sand and smell the salt in the air if their body is not at the beach? You must know that there exists in us our real self who simply uses our body as a vehicle to do work on Earth. Think of it in these terms; If a person were to talk to a cat and ask the cat “Are cars alive and conscious?” The cat would answer “Yes, they move about on their own and the stop to let others pass. They are alive.” Humans know that this is not true; humans know that a person is driving and giving the car consciousness. The cat is simply just unaware of the truth; so the cat’s reality is that cars live. Humans give cars consciousness and the entity in our mind gives our body consciousness.
Back to the bumper sticker that read “Freedom isn’t Free”. It has been realized to read “You are you and not else and equal to you”. This means that the truth of the world is in you and it has been since your birth. It was only the influence of the world and the men in it that move you from the truth by deception, brainwashing and mindless business. Look inside of yourself and you will find more beauty than any gold or precious stone this world can offer.
This is just some of the truth. You have witnessed truth since your birth, others and I have shown you truth, and it is your job to seek the truth that is being withheld from you. I will leave with you important information that will be needed in the very near future.  
Do not fear any man. You are greater than those who bring harm.
Do not fear the harsh words of man.
Do not harm anyone. Even in your own defense. There is no reason for defense.
Do not fear death. You did not fear you birth!
Do not soak in emotions from the past. They have no relation to the present or future.
Only keep with you love. Share love will all, including people who harm.
Forgive all who have harmed you, even those yet to harm you.



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Given By: Ronin Sumomo
Critique Date:02/22/2009

Critique:From the lyrics of Common: "The present is a gift and I just want to be." Simple concept difficult execution. A lot of shit is unnecessary because reality is only what you choose (it seems it's easier to choose the bullshit judging from the world I witness). I loved you saying "Do not fear death. You did not fear birth!" In closing, I will state the lyrics of Talib Kweli: "You're only scared to die if you ain't living right." Now that's the Truth.   

Grade:Excellent


Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:12/21/2008

Critique:Hi, and glad to have a place for you to get your thoughts accross. A very philosophical write here. I liked how you took it, premise building on premise, almost like Socrates and your final outcome, it says it all, you are your own existance with whatever baggage you carry. If a person realizes they create reality then they can truly grasp the word "is." If you can convice the others it is then it is, in their perception following yours and if good is your hearts journey, the world can only benefit. Thought provoking, Dennis
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Grade:Excellent


 
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