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I AM

I am the sky,


Everyone try to touch me,


But are unable to jump that high.


 


I am like the sea,


Everyone try to know about me,


But are unable to dive that deep.


 


 I am like the forest,


Dying daily,


But always green for others.


 


I am like a bird,


I don’t have a single destination,


I don’t have a definite limit.


 


I am like soft wind,


Pleasant for others,


But still wandering.


 


I am like a river,


I chose my own path,


So that I don’t blame others for my tomorrow.


 


 I am like a wave,


 I never return back towards the sea,


Though I drop while reaching the shore.


 


 A fake smile on my face,


Tears hiding behind my eyes,


So that the world can see only the first one.


 


As I am the nature’s form,


I have never learnt to ask,


 But to provide what others are asking for.



by nivi_thegreat

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Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:12/27/2008

Critique:It seems man is at constant challenge with nature that surrounds his existance, when will he learn that nature can provide or turn against us. We need nature more so then she needs us, humanity is a mere blemish in relation to the billion of years she has existed, hope we learn soon or become extinct. A very thought provoking write.

Grade:Good


 
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