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ACROSTIC *Katina*

Kudos to my friend

Always there for me

To help me with everything

In her I find a writing buddy

Never quick to judge

And always strong



by Steven

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Given By: CountryAngel
Critique Date:05/05/2008

Critique:Yes, I feel the same way .... I also met Katina just recently and I am very proud to say she will soon be my cousin !!!!!!  

Grade:Excellent


Given By: kuirq
Critique Date:11/20/2007

Critique:This is a cool piece. I was trying to skim through my brain what "acrostic" meant, and it just popped out when I read through your poem. Anyway, it flowed nicely and it wasn't a forced acrostic at all.

Grade:Excellent


Given By: Ale E
Critique Date:11/10/2007

Critique:Aww..i really like this. And it is also very true indeed. Im so glad I came across her at allpoetry!!!!!

Grade:Excellent


Given By: Katina
Critique Date:10/03/2007

Critique:Awe...thank you Steve. This is the first poem I pulled up this morning and it has brought a huge smile to my face. The day is hard sometimes, waking up with pain again. Although, it is having friends like you that help me stay strong. Thank you again Steven. This poem will be treasured in my life. Have a great day, and keep writing! Your friend and writing pal, Katina. :)
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Grade:Excellent


 
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