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Life Decisions

Sometimes you have to realize when you've lost and start preparing for the next battle



by journalistbarbie

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Given By: bluemoon
Critique Date:05/18/2009

Critique:Such a simple statement, but one that we can all identify with. Sometimes it's good to read something like this, it focuses the mind. I have to say I'm not over keen on the purple background, just my personal view, but it detracts from the stark simplicity of the statement.

Grade:Good


Given By: raenie
Critique Date:05/15/2009

Critique:A lot of truth stated in one sentence. The hardest part though is when to realize that you've lost. Life sure doesn't come easy sometimes...thought provoking line you have here, thanks for it...btw, I agree with kuirq on the typo in "to"...

Grade:Good


Given By: kuirq
Critique Date:05/15/2009

Critique:A thought provoking quote, makes one think how life indeed is a series of battles, some lost and others won, but all the same there's something to be learned. May I point out that there's an extra 'o' in 'to'. Thanks for sharing.

Grade:Good


Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:05/13/2009

Critique:How so very true and sometimes it comes at you in threes, but you have to understand there is no giving up so get ready for the "next battle" and we go on from there. Sometimes one line can say so much as yours did. Thanks much for sharing. Read pulltheletter's Going Home, along your lines but expanded.

Grade:Good


 
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