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White Devil

 


Crack, Heroin, Cocaine


The chemicals that have caused so much pain


From coursing through weak veins


Dictating every thought in the brain


 


What do You, White Devil, Care?


Destroying our families


Leaving us as vague figures in Your rearview mirror


 


You, White Devil, create problems


Then claim that You, White Devil, can solve them


 


Making Your victims fiend for the high


You, White Devil, are a Mother Fucker


And do nothing but lie


Causing Your victims to want to Die


And disregard the True Meaning of Life


 


What is it about You, White Devil, that entices?


We will never have You, White Devil, as one of our vices


 


You, White Devil, exploit the ignorant


We have to commend You, White Devil, You are diligent


 


Extremely meticulous


By not just offering the euphoric high


But also creating economic interest


 


You, White Devil, are an addict for fellatio


They love You, White Devil, so much they can't say no


 


You, White Devil, ruin our families


You, White Devil, even take our sanity


Making us not want to be apart of humanity


 


We hate You, White Devil, with everything in our Hearts


For ripping our fucking families apart           


 


You, White Devil, are vain


Have You, White Devil, ever felt this much pain?



by Ronin Sumomo (Viewed 283 times)

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Other Critiques of this Work
Given By: zahid_511
Critique Date:11/09/2008

Critique:great poem, really liked it, captures teh apin taht drugs cause, tnx fo rletting me read it.   best zahid

Grade:Good


Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:10/25/2007

Critique:This should be displayed perhaps at High Schools as a reminder of the truth, although, with out the profanity. It is a well written piece about a plague to society, too many people caught up in it's appeal and negative outcomes prevail. Good writing! Dennis

Grade:Good


 
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