PAIN - Haiku : One-Stop Write Shop

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[Relentless Writing 25 Tokens]

PAIN

Each morning I wake

the pain reminds me I'm here

One day to be free

by Katina (Viewed 822 times)

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Given By:	Rufo7725
Critique Date:	10/15/2009

Critique:	I like this; it is a realistic view of the human condition. We all experience pain in our lives and it just reminds us that we\'re still alive. Describing a very complex point of psychology in just 17 syllables deserves an excellent in my opinion.
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