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Hell in the Fields

(Chorus)


Still a child at heart


but its getting late


Can't change the feel


Can't argue with fate


 


(Verse)


When the tides stay the same


and the stories change


my ride to hell


 


In a time of peace


when all hoped for war


When they shot the man


and they changed the law


That's where the ending began


 


(chorus)


 


(verse)


Its never alright to stay out


the child at heart is scared


if their eyes looked for rain


they got thunder


 


As they hailed their cross


and killed for cause


i couldn't look anymore


My beds feeling warm


and i just want war


 


(Chorus)


 


(Outro)


Look to the eyes


See them die


All I do now is


cry.


 



by slenmill

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