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KIWIS AND LEMONS

Unless you’re given to metaphorical reflection, it’s unlikely you’d compare life to any type of fruit. Then there’s me; I’m accused regularly of thinking a bit off center.


One morning as I was arranging kiwis and lemons in a crystal bowl, it dawned on me that life closely parallels the attributes of these divergent fruits.


First, one almost never sees them gathered together in a display. But when I nestle them in concert, I see them as concurrently contrasting and complementary. The lemon is cheeky and bold; the greenish hue of the kiwi peeks through a russet brown, falsely timid.


A kiwi can be intimidating. Although hope springs from the light green tincture of the fruit, the skin is hairy and inedible, yet you have to touch it to get to the substance, the soul.


It takes faith to slice through snarky. Beneath lies a satisfying sweet fruit, redolent with splendor. If you garner the courage, the payoff is dulcet and the price is de minimis. Granted, there are a few black seeds but you barely notice them, save once in a while when an erstwhile stray gets stuck in your teeth. It takes audacity to search for the sweetness in life. Not allowing an errant cloud to spoil a sunny day akin to ignoring the seeds.


Lemons are outwardly beautiful. Their skin is smooth and, let’s face it…it takes certain mettle to wear bright yellow. A specific, “look at me I’m beautiful” confidence. I’ve always admired that about lemons.


The rind of a lemon is tough. When it gives way to a sharp knife, the flesh looks appealing. Pale and juicy it tempts. Bite and your mouth puckers violently. Tart and bitter battle over your taste buds but you fight through it.


 Beauty is a magnet and we’re all drawn to pulchritude, to be sure. We learn early, however, the bitterness of lemon, but the pucker provokes us to improve it; add some sugar, make lemonade.


My husband and I built a dream life together, but didn’t find happiness. It was grandiose to the naked eye, but eventually the pungent flesh beneath the rind couldn’t be sweetened. No amount of apology could forgive the sin. Eventually the bitter taste subsided… I got through it.


On my own, I devised a far less grand existence. A diminished life style is easy to pass by, there’s no shine to the surface. But risk has reward and substance begets merit. I’ve found sweetness beneath the facade.


Lemons are more common than kiwi. They both grow on trees, but there are far fewer kiwi farms than citrus groves. Lemons are plentiful; we find them everywhere, every season. Some voluntarily spurn the lemon and seek the juicy, saccharine kiwi.


We age into knowing that there will always be both. In spite of the pucker we need lemons for flavor – a squeeze over veal, a slice in sweet tea. Lemons provide a sense of purpose; the will to make things better.


A kiwi stands alone; waiting for the wisdom of one who seeks a slice of heaven. You’ll need courage for the hunt and guts to pierce the skin in search of the substantive.


Arranging them now I wonder if all our lives are a little of each. They’re equally decorative and utilitarian.


Kiwi and lemons…sweet and sour slices of life. They go well together in a bowl, I think. More to the point, they look lovely on my kitchen table on a sober gray day.



by jacquiegum (Viewed 909 times)

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Given By: raenie
Critique Date:02/25/2010

Critique:Hi again Jacquie :) reading your writings always leaves me with a different perspective on things, that's why I find your work so refreshing--I too have never given much thought on kiwis and lemons, and I have to admit that when I first saw your title--it piqued my interest right away, noting the unusual combination (despite the fact of them both being on the oblong side) --thanks for sharing your insights on these fruits...I'll never look at them in the same way again ;) 
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Grade:Excellent


Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:02/21/2010

Critique:A very interesting write, almost philosophical. When you pose the question of comparison, a choice is made based in the readers perception. Both sides have merit, and yet, the outcome you draw says both fruits have a place in life and can ultimately offer beauty. If we can do this with all the people we meet daily, then maybe we are on to something, great write Jacquie.
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Grade:Excellent


Given By: kuirq
Critique Date:02/14/2010

Critique:You got my attention from the first line to the last. I read poetry more often than any other genre here on OSWS, but curiosity got me to click on your piece. And I'm glad I did. I love how lightly the article came across and yet it is full of depth. I found myself nodding my head with each line of reflection that you made. I never really thought of reading more into fruit (I'm thinking more on the lines of should I eat it as is or make it into juice :D). Thanks for your reflections, I appreciate your reflections and the reminder that out of something so mundane, could arise something much deeper than what we first see. And by the way, I think both fruits are really refreshingly good as well :).
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Grade:Excellent


Given By:[Deleted User]
Critique Date:02/14/2010

Critique:Hi Jacqiue, a refreshingly original slant on not judging a book by its cover. As kuirq said, it's light and easy to read yet the content is both analytical and thought provoking. As I read, I found myself classifying the people I know as lemons or kiwis, although sometimes the sweetest of kiwis can have a hard core. I like your message of 'look beneath the surface' to reveal the real person or situation. As always, a polished and professional write, really enjoyed it.
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Grade:Excellent


Given By: marvthebass
Critique Date:02/13/2010

Critique:BRILLIANCE! although i think some of the word usage might be beyond what most can understand, but its not bad. i love how you didn't just chose one thing about each fruit and compare it to humanity, instead you used nearly every part of each fruit and made a connection to types of people. thanks for sharing!
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Grade:Excellent


 
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