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Light fades to black as the moon flickers with life


Passions flow as your essence shimmer in shadows past


Light which lingers as it caressed your chest


Your hair, how it mingles in the distance of faded fantasies


Lure and lust stand erect in the moonlit motions of yesteryear


Rhyming the rot like diamond in dirt


 


This world of blank pages, roam in the mist


Where those memories of a life time linger


Those bits of time which tell me who I am


Those liaisons we speak to, when we need little white lies


Limericks rumble with laughter die silently


Listening to lyrics whispering romance


 


Questions I ask were they just taking up space,


When all was all before me, the possibilities,


Of those who long for loves embrace


Will you give me that chance that changes my fate


Or will join in the laughter, while


The queen of sorrows throws dirt on my grave


 


 



by Paladin elda

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Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:03/02/2010

Critique:A very sad write in my opinion, I can feel the hurt and anguish, who knows what tomorrow will bring? Even if love is captured, are all the answers answered, it could be momentarily. Seems there are no giveaways in life but if we are alive, that is a good start for tomorrow and so we go on. I may be wrong but I feel this write comes straight from the heart, nobody said life is fair, I wish it was sometimes. Your writing digs deep into the soul humanity and I thought it was excellent.
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Grade:Excellent


 
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