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Sadness

 


 


Feeling very sad


my son left for Germany


God Bless you my son



by CountryAngel (Viewed 661 times)

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Other Critiques of this Work
Given By:[Deleted User]
Critique Date:04/30/2010
Critique:Powerful. Beautiful & enduring Diane!  
Grade:Excellent


Given By: kuirq
Critique Date:04/21/2010
Critique:It's a good thing you'll are able to keep in touch with him. Hopefully you'll see him again real soon. ANother hug for you! :)
Grade:Good


Given By: raenie
Critique Date:04/14/2010
Critique:I'll keep praying for your son, Diane :) hugs to you! 
Grade:Good


Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:04/06/2010
Critique:It is a mother's journey that I think you know all too well living a military life. First your husband and now your son. He will do well there, he is not facing out right combat and knowing him he will stay in touch. Your write expresses those feelings well. Nice when you had him here. 
Grade:Good


 
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