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These Golden moments in Time

These Golden moments in Time


Are caught between the stars and the sky


You will have yours and I will have mine


These Golden moments in Time


Are like delicate flowers clinging on the vine


Once the rain comes, they will be hard to find


These Golden Moments in Time


Are like the tender snowflakes gently drifting to the ground


Just to perfect to live or to stay around


These Golden Moments in Time


Savor each moment because they are fleeting


For that you can be sure


So innocent and magical they will leave you wanting more


Each smile-Each kiss- Each tear


How precious and pure, but in time they will disappear


These golden Moments in Time


Try not to shed a tear


Just hold on to your dreams, dear and near


Open you heart and open your mind


And reminisce always about


These Golden Moments in time


Written by


Louise Lagerman



by txlouise

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Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:06/13/2010

Critique:A very touching and well written piece of poetry. It is full of wisdom that people learn over the years. Life is fleeting and when a person realizes that it makes them think how precious it really is. I totally enjoyed your poem.

Grade:Excellent


 
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