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Within A Hush

candle flickers soft ~
lay upon petals of rose,
hide within a hush



by PoetOfLight (Viewed 300 times)

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Other Critiques of this Work
Given By: blue_eyes_wander
Critique Date:01/15/2008
Critique:beautiful. gorgeous. Lush. Intimate. Wonderful haiku!! Tasty words...mmmmmm
Grade:Excellent


Given By: Katina
Critique Date:11/24/2007
Critique:LOVE IT LOVE IT, OH YEAH, I LOVED IT!
Grade:Excellent


 
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