| CATEGORY: Haiku |
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Within A Hush
candle flickers soft ~
lay upon petals of rose,
hide within a hush
by PoetOfLight
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| Other Critiques of this Work |
| Given By: |   CountryAngel 
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| Critique Date: | 01/07/2009 |
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| Critique: | Maybe I shouldn't say this, BUT in my mind can be sexy. |
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| Given By: |   blue_eyes_wander
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| Critique Date: | 01/15/2008 |
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| Critique: | beautiful. gorgeous. Lush. Intimate.
Wonderful haiku!! Tasty words...mmmmmm |
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| Given By: | [Deleted User] |
| Critique Date: | 11/24/2007 |
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| Critique: | LOVE IT LOVE IT, OH YEAH, I LOVED IT! |
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