CATEGORY: Haiku


In My Hand

A star burning bright

held in the palm of my hand

ripped right from the sky



by kuirq (Viewed 208 times)

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Other Critiques of this Work
Given By: The Phantom Tragedy
Critique Date:12/01/2007

Critique:I have to be in a certain mood to enjoy Haiku. I'll tell you my friend, yours did not dissapoint. Great Job! ~Jared

Grade:Excellent


Given By: PoetOfLight
Critique Date:11/30/2007

Critique:Now this is an excellent haiku! I absolutely love the image you created in this profound piece.

Grade:Excellent


Given By: Dennis
Critique Date:11/12/2007

Critique:I liked this piece, just a few lines dipicts a profound image in the mind of the reader. I can all most see it happening. Dennis P.S. 575

Grade:Good


 
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