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Wool Jackets

Crooked minds


Twisted views


A sadistic nature


Ugly thoughts


Warped delusions


of innocent capers




Tainted smile


Dirty hands


sincerely reaching out


Shifting eyes


Crossed fingers


stirring up doubt




Delicate yells


Booming whispers


Believable advice


Horrendous love


Beckoning harm


Plentiful lies




Concealed deceit


Stalking weak


Predators so ragged


Frozen hearts


Crave warmth


of wool jackets



by madaddicted (Viewed 136 times)

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Given By: soulpath
Critique Date:11/07/2011

Critique:Seems to sum up local on a Friday night far too well.  An honest and frightenly accurate portrayal of too many situations I have been aware of....Excellent
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Grade:Excellent


 
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