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A Better Man

I do not have the skill,


My words of simple man.


My lacking I confess,


Please try to understand.


A better man than me.


Compared a summers day,


When senses were amazed,


And beauty walked his way.


A better man by far,


But I swear it true,


He too would find words lost,


Knowing the beauty which is you


 



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Given By: bluemoon
Critique Date:10/21/2011

Critique:Hey, where have you and your beautiful words been hiding. I think most of us would love to write like old Wills, but this is just perfect. You can and do find the words. I love it. Hope all is well with you:)
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Grade:Excellent


 
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