| CATEGORY: Haiku |
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Echo
tragic romantic pining away for love lost rejection echoes
by kuirq (Viewed 546 times)
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| Given By: |   bluemoon 
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| Critique Date: | 08/10/2009 |
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| Critique: | I'm not sure if this was edited slightly since my last comment, but my comments didn't make sense anymore so I've re-visited them. It's a lovely write, very atmospheric, I can almost feel the emptiness echoing. It makes me imagine a nymph-like character; her loss and heartache ringing out over lakes and mountains. Great last line. |
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| Given By: | Katina
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| Critique Date: | 08/09/2009 |
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| Critique: | Wow! I can't believe I have not read this haiku yet. Wow! 4 star write Ninna. Great work!. Really like the last line, it's a twist. |
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| Given By: |  CountryAngel
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| Critique Date: | 05/15/2008 |
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| Critique: | This is sd, lost love, but the words are nice!! |
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| Given By: | [Deleted User] |
| Critique Date: | 12/01/2007 |
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| Critique: | I really like how you begin this poem. However i feel compelled to say that although I like the words, I dont see an image when I read this poem. I keep coming back to the words "yet again and". They seem unecessary. You have such a talent for image and I just dont see it here. I will come back to this one later |
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| Grade: | Needs Revised |
| Given By: |   PoetOfLight
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| Critique Date: | 11/30/2007 |
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| Critique: | In only 8 words, you have managed to convey the pain of a soul.
Well done, Poet! |
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| Given By: | Dennis
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| Critique Date: | 11/28/2007 |
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| Critique: | Your work here is almost like my Haiku, Colors, dealing with love. Can be a fleeting concept, emotion, feeling, or perhaps we will never figure it out, just go with the flow and hope for the best, yet, no guarantees. Good write, Dennis |
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