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The flow

Reach for the tide now

Waters flowing beyond grip

Burst, to flow freely



by Dennis (Viewed 204 times)

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Given By: raenie
Critique Date:12/02/2007
Critique:This haiku sure is packed with meaning & I love how it can also have a subtext to it. Truly, the power of water is a force to be reckoned with--& hopefully so are we...great read, satff den--thanks!
Grade:Excellent


Given By: PoetOfLight
Critique Date:11/30/2007
Critique:Carpe Diem! What an inspiration!
Grade:Good


 
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