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Warmth

With her love, as mine

Visions of softness prevail

Romance blossoming



by Dennis (Viewed 927 times)

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Given By: raenie
Critique Date:02/03/2009
Critique:Wow, I can't believe I missed this haiku, Dennis! This spells romantic all the way, and I think your title is very fitting as it leaves the reader with such a warm feeling--such a wonderful haiku, even more so since we know it comes from the heart :)
Grade:Excellent


Given By: Jester
Critique Date:05/05/2008
Critique:I'm not very familiar with haiku's but this one kind of taps into the inner romanitc. It's very powerful emotions with such few words. I really like it.
Grade:Excellent


Given By: kuirq
Critique Date:12/19/2007
Critique:I do think it's your best haiku. There's a wonderful sweetness to the poem that makes the reader smile. It comes from the heart and drives at the heart. Beautiful!
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Grade:Excellent


Given By: Katina
Critique Date:12/16/2007
Critique:Beautiful.
Grade:Excellent


 
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