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Sand and Water

Laughing, tickling waves

Gently embracing the sand

Fleeting hi's and byes 



by raenie (Viewed 393 times)

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Given By: PoetOfLight
Critique Date:01/07/2008
Critique:One can hear the ocean's rhythm in this ku. Well done!
Grade:Excellent


 
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