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Drenching Rain

Come drench me with rain


To refresh and wash my soul


Purging me today


 



by raenie (Viewed 291 times)

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Other Critiques of this Work
Given By: Sgt B
Critique Date:03/31/2008
Critique:A cleansing? A second chance? Very thought provoking.
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Grade:Good


Given By: Ronin Sumomo
Critique Date:01/16/2008
Critique:I envisioned the samurai of Japan preparing for battle. Beautiful!
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Grade:Excellent


Given By: PoetOfLight
Critique Date:01/07/2008
Critique:I like the effect this has on the spirit.
Grade:Excellent


 
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