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Slow Foundings

Magic knowing sky

a stone whispers movement ~ slow

ages of seconds



by blue_eyes_wander

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Critique Date:01/18/2008

Critique:SUPER! I really like this one. "Magic knowing sky" what a beautiful way to describe the sky. Ahh...so few words, and yet, so much offered. Words are truly wonderful--and, one day I will learn how to spell them correctly! LOL, I had to add this, as I just sent out over 500 emails about the new site additions and guess what? The very first word of my email was spelled wrong, not a good way to promote a writing site eh? LOL. Time for a visit with my trusty ole dictionary--hope I spelled that right. :) Good Job!

Grade:Excellent


 
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