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air (AmeriKu)
breath of life
invisible source
lifting wings
with whispered dreams
*Author's note:
AmeriKu is a new form of short-verse poetry created by Joseph Randell Sherman in 2007.
The simple guidelines for this form are as follows:
The poem consists of 4 unrhymed lines of 3-5-3-4 syllables written on a nature and/or spiritual theme.
I truly hope you enjoy and that some of you will try it.
by PoetOfLight
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| Given By: |   soulpath 
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| Critique Date: | 03/11/2009 |
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| Critique: | I am here, I am the moment, I am life. I will not die. Think I've got the hang though not as skilled as you piece. Thoroughly enjoyed. Here for you, Always by your side, I would not, Desert you child. It's cool |
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| Given By: | [Deleted User] |
| Critique Date: | 02/13/2008 |
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| Critique: | The title drew me to read this. I'm glad I did, lovely write! I have voted for it to be spotlighted! I think I will try my hand at writing one of these. Thanks for letting us know about this form. Maybe we could add this as a cagegory in the poetry section of the site! Thanks again
May I use your description here to add as the descrip for the new category? |
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| Given By: |  lecanis
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| Critique Date: | 02/01/2008 |
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| Critique: | Wow, I hadn't heard of AmeriKu before, but I really enjoyed your poem. I could see using it as a meditative mantra or chant. |
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