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air (AmeriKu)

breath of life
invisible source
lifting wings
with whispered dreams

*Author's note:
AmeriKu is a new form of short-verse poetry created by Joseph Randell Sherman in 2007.
The simple guidelines for this form are as follows:
The poem consists of 4 unrhymed lines of 3-5-3-4 syllables written on a nature and/or spiritual theme.
I truly hope you enjoy and that some of you will try it.

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Given By:	Katina
Critique Date:	02/13/2008

Critique:	The title drew me to read this. I'm glad I did, lovely write! I have voted for it to be spotlighted! I think I will try my hand at writing one of these. Thanks for letting us know about this form. Maybe we could add this as a cagegory in the poetry section of the site! Thanks again May I use your description here to add as the descrip for the new category?


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Given By:	lecanis
Critique Date:	02/01/2008

Critique:	Wow, I hadn't heard of AmeriKu before, but I really enjoyed your poem. I could see using it as a meditative mantra or chant.


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