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The Alchemist
The Alchemist
A leadened heart devoid of trust until an alchemist came along, turning it into gold- Or so it seemed... Trust, broken trust.
It was now a locket that held secrets, that had a key protected by fear Hidden in the darkness of silence- Or so it seemed... Secrets, imprisoned secrets.
There was one escape, only through tears, tarnishing the heart all the more Somehow encrusting it forever- Or so it seemed... Tears, overflowing tears.
This river led to the sea of silence, and stayed there. Eerily still, no undercurrents perceived- Or so it seemed... Silence, deafening silence.
Numbing, unwavering trepidation, kept all those unwanted secrets safe Weakening the heart, deeming it hopeless- Or so it seemed... Trepidation, paralyzing trepidation.
But fear also harnesses strength and the alchemist within was the key Breaking the silence, unlocking the secrets- And so it was... Strength, energizing strength.
This eventually led to tenacity, tears hardening into diamonds of courage Allowing the waves of silence to finally crash And so it was... Tenacity, freeing tenacity. The heart now had a soaring spirit, with a fire emboldening other hearts Infinitely turning lead into gold- And so it is... Spirit, emblazoning spirit.
This thus far is the story of one heart's triumph, written for the world to know Giving hope and gilding hearts- And so it will be... Triumph, crowning triumph!
NIKKO RAE S. PALMARIO © 2008 Authors Note: Inspiration for this poem actually came from the suggested topics given in the Contest Rules. "Overcoming obstacles" just seemed like such a powerful theme that it made me think of people who were in abusive relationships--since obstacles such as these are so hard to overcome, and therefore are such triumphs. This actually started out as a work entitled "Trust"--of which I started to tell a story about a woman betrayed, having my last line of my 1st stanza as "Trust, broken trust" This is the only line retained from "Trust". Since I stopped after writing the 1st stanza and was captivated by my last line that I just knew I had to approach my poem differently-- And so, the alchemist came along, turning lead into gold ^_~ I hope you are inspired with this poem, as much as I was suddenly inspired in writing it! by raenie (Viewed 638 times)
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